Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, December 4, 2019
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kia ora alex that was so cool this reminded of the animation that I did but something that you can improv on is your spelling
ReplyDeleteHi Alex it is Jaydee the front page of your animation looks good you can add more detail but otherwise it looks good
ReplyDeleteyou can add more slides on to make it more interesting because it's getting into a cool animation
this reminds me of one of my animations. Bye Alex
Hi Alex, it's Ella. I liked the way you had the super powers and your characters were amazing. Did you think about have more words and proof reading? Maybe next time you could check your spelling.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex I liked the way you made yourself burn and the characters looked really cool. Next time you need to check your spelling and proof read it.
ReplyDeleteHi Alex, It's Kadie. I liked the way you had super powers! Maybe next time you could say yes instead of yer. But other than that, Keep it up!!
ReplyDeleteHi Alex! i really liked your slide and thought it was great work
ReplyDeletewell done and keep up the good work. From Jayden c